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Fic: Five First Kisses and One Follow-Up (NCIS)

Fic: Five First Kisses and One Follow-Up (NCIS)

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kaylashay81: (NCIS - Gibbs/Tony Helping)
Title: Five First Kisses and One Follow-Up
Author: [livejournal.com profile] kaylashay81
Rating: FR15
Disclaimer: I'm not Bellesario or CBS, so I don't claim to own them.
Warnings: M/M Mentioned, nothing graphic
Genre: Slash
Pairings: Gibbs/DiNozzo, DiNozzo/Other(s) mentioned
Word Count: 6 x 100
Spoilers: Through 06x02 Agent Afloat
Challenge: [livejournal.com profile] ncisdrabble100; Past Challenge #107 - Kiss

Crossposted: [livejournal.com profile] ncisdrabble100; [livejournal.com profile] ncisfanfic; [livejournal.com profile] gibbs_dinozzo; [livejournal.com profile] gibbsbasement

Summary: Since the invention of the kiss there have been five kisses that were rated the most passionate, the most pure. This one left them all behind.

Shelly Hawthorne. She was in second grade while he was in first. She had arrived at the party with her parents only to be forgotten in the midst of drinks and business deals. She had somehow found the little hole he used to observe all his parents’ parties when his presence wasn’t demanded for showing off a new song or language. After awhile, she pointed at his mother who was in a corner with some business associate of his father’s and said, “Let’s do what their doing.” Afterwards, her parents dragged her from the house and he couldn’t sit comfortably.

Dennis Hawthorne. He was Shelly’s twin brother and a senior. Dennis was captain of the football team and was dating not one, but two of the cheerleaders. All the guys looked up to him and all the girls wanted him. It wasn’t until they were pressed against a row of lockers after the final game of the season in semi-darkness that he learned that not just the girls wanted Dennis. He couldn’t breath as a demanding male tongue pressed into his mouth. All he could do was buck against the thigh between his legs and embarrass himself a minute later.

Amanda Reed. Lieutenant Commander Hamilton Voss. She (or was that he?) was a killer. No matter which way he looked at it, the kiss made him sick. It wasn’t the gender that made him sick. It was the fact that she had killed Pacci, a man he had been friends and co-workers with for over two years and he didn’t know it. He let Kate’s teasing about tonguing a guy wash over him, but remembering her was making him sick. He managed to wait until Kate and McGee had left for the day before he went to the bathroom stall.

Jeanne Benoit. She was an assignment from the Director. In his mind he kept repeating that over and over as he befriended her in the hospital’s cafeteria. He talked her into a date that morning, but it wasn’t until their third date that he felt butterflies firing machine guns in his stomach as he pressed his lips to hers. A little voice that sounded suspiciously like Gibbs was telling him to think about what the hell he was doing. However, he ignored it just like he ignored the phantom twinges from repeated non-existent smacks to the back of his head.

Leroy Jethro Gibbs. He was his boss. He was Obi-Wan to his Luke, Ricky to his Lucy, Ennis to his Jack. He could only manage a lame joke as he looked at the blue tinged lips he had wanted to touch for years. "Don't make me kiss you, Boss." He pressed his own cold lips to Gibbs’ for the first time and tried to breathe life into his still form. As time slipped by, he wanted to order the older man to live just like he was ordered to do in that isolation room at Bethesda. Gibbs could not die.

The second ‘b’ really stood for bastard because it wasn’t until he was back from a four-month stint at sea that he had a chance to replace that first kiss. Their second happened in the basement with a bit of sawdust and bourbon for flavor. His mind flashed back to that long ago moment against a locker as a thigh pressed between his legs and he groaned. Their lips parted and Gibbs flashed a rare smile and some words, “Not bad for a first kiss, DiNozzo.” He smiled back and responded, “Not our first kiss Boss, but you’re getting better.”
  • Ha! Loved that last line. I think I liked the one about Shelly's brother the best.
    • kaylashay81: (SPN - Gotcha!)
      Dennis was my favorite too. Poor young Tony embarrassing himself...
  • That last line was great.

    ♥ Ella
    • kaylashay81: (SPN - Gotcha!)
      I loved it when I did it. I actually had something else there and it didn't read right so I got that instead.
  • *Zing!* GREAT last line. I love it when he can one up Gibbs. :D
  • Nice work, and this visual butterflies firing machine guns made me snort hot tea as I fell into giggles.

    Perfect DiNozzo line there at the close.
    • kaylashay81: (SPN - Gotcha!)
      At first he just had butterflies in his stomach and then I was like... DiNozzo's don't do ordinary butterflies, so they started firing machine guns. :-)

      Couldn't resist that line.
      • and then I was like... DiNozzo's don't do ordinary butterflies, so they started firing machine guns

        And this wins for best random ass idea of the week of November 2-8, 2008.
        *hands you Caff-Pow* :D
  • Brillaint.
  • Fabulous! I liked all the kisses but the banter at the end of the *second* Gibbs kiss was my favourite *ggg*.
    • kaylashay81: (SPN - Gotcha!)
      I have a *thing* for Gibbs/Tony banter. They banter so well.

      And I really do love that icon. They are so similar in so many ways. :-)
      • Thanks re the icon *beams*. I got a friend to make it for me and we had such fun with it.

        I wish we saw more Gibbs/Tony banter on the show. Sigh.
  • Cute! And coincide with the rest the last line was brill and so DiNozzo :-)
  • Love it!
    Last line is the best!
    • kaylashay81: (SPN - Gotcha!)
      It seems that the last line is the winning line of the fic.

      :-)
  • Pure essense of Tony!

    Love the way everything flowed, revealing different aspects of our boy.
    • Re: Pure essense of Tony!

      kaylashay81: (SPN - Gotcha!)
      :-)

      I love getting inside Tony's head.
  • Lovely.
  • Ah, wonderful fic!! Loved Tony's remark to Gibbs at the end as well as the glimpse into Tony's experimentation growing up.
    • kaylashay81: (SPN - Gotcha!)
      I'm so glad I changed that last line now. Originally it was something else and it just didn't work. I had to change that last paragraph a bit for the 100 to work out to have that line.

      You know Tony had to experiment. I see him as the kind of guy who would try anything at least once to see if he likes it.
  • Awesome last line. Great job. :D
  • Nice closer - ties up the story well :-)
    • kaylashay81: (SPN - Gotcha!)
      Thanks! I'm so glad I changed it from what I originally had there now. I don't even remember what it was now... :-)
  • luthien82: (ncis : tony : lonesome in iraq)
    Awww, that last comment is so Tony *hugs him*

    Lovely!
  • *bounces* You posted! And it was made of win!

    I'm still partial to the Dennis Hawthorne one but the last line was so very Tony. *applauds*
    • kaylashay81: (SPN - Gotcha!)
      I think Tony needs to meet Dennis Hawthorne again pre-NCIS (maybe Philly or Baltimore) and turn the tables on him. :-)
  • And the winner of the Last Line Lollapolooza championship isssss...

    ladyjane: whipped cream and hand-cuffs. "Got Plans?" (Keeper!Tony)
    KAYLA SHAY for her shameless shenanigans.
    *holds up engraved leaded crystal sun catcher*
    On behalf of all the Gibbs-DiNozzo banter lovers, please accept this award for Best Punch Line, EVV-VAHR. Honestly, that line belongs right up there with Bacall's crack to Bogart, "It's even better when you help."

    ~_~_~_~_~

    All kidding aside,
    My favorite tale is the Amanda Reed kiss. I had never thought of it from that angle. I'd love to see you take the idea further and develop it into a full-blown story.
  • Your stories

    (Anonymous)
    Do you ever feel that maybe you are demoralizing and sabotarging the characters of Gibbs and DiNozzo and how humiliated and embarraced Mark Harmon and Michael Weatherly might feel if they read your stories? You have such a talent for words, but you waste it on such utter porno drivel. I'm broadminded and I've read a few worse stories than yours which were far too over the top. If you are such a fan, why do you treat them with such disrespect? Why not write an episode of ncis they can be proud of, you have the talent.
  • Been lurking and reading your NCIS fic for quite a while.... love it....

    This line made me melt....

    Leroy Jethro Gibbs. He was his boss. He was Obi-Wan to his Luke, Ricky to his Lucy, Ennis to his Jack.

    Thank you.....

    Mary
    • kaylashay81: (Coffee)
      Thanks for dropping the review!

      And glad you enjoyed that line!

      :-)