Kayla Shay - Fanart, Fanfiction & More

Ah, man...this is a terrific collection of tied-together thoughts. The ever-present cold that parallels DiNozzo's bleakest times is a great method to remind the reader of the connection between the body and the soul.

I also want to comment on how much emotion you managed to capture from such few words, like short, staccato jabs to the heart. Nice work-

Matt