You know, I really wish there was a way that I could make this private, but oh well. I'll edit or delete this once you get the changes.
Betaing: Here I was a tough as nails marine and I was scared to death that was about to be responsible for the life I helped create. put *I* inbetween ...death that *I* was about to...
The moment I saw Kelley and her baby blue eyes, I knew my worries had been unfounded. Kelley should be Kelly *wink* There are three other Kelley's further down that need to be changed to Kelly, as well.
Betaing: Here I was a tough as nails marine and I was scared to death that was about to be responsible for the life I helped create. put *I* inbetween ...death that *I* was about to...
The moment I saw Kelley and her baby blue eyes, I knew my worries had been unfounded. Kelley should be Kelly *wink* There are three other Kelley's further down that need to be changed to Kelly, as well.